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Midterm Exam: Creating a Drama


The DiaRin

Dyatlov: an exchange student from Russia, live in Rin’s house.
Rin: high school graduates, work as minimarket cashier while waiting for university announcement, foster family for Dyatlov.
Rin’s mother: a housewife.
Rin’s father: a civil servant.

Place:
Rin’s house
Hie shrine

Definition:
suki (好) – like            
tsuki (月)moon
onii-san – Japanese word for big brother
matcha - finely ground powder of green tea leaves
matsuri – festival
yukata – Japanese garment, usually used for summer




It’s been two months since Diatlov's first arrival in Japan as an exchange student from Russia. She lived with a foster family there. One evening, back from his campus, Diatlov enters the house with a tired face.

Diatlov: I’m home
Rin’s father: Welcome back
Rin’s mother: Welcome back. Oh, it seems like a tough day for you isn’t it? Good job!
Diatlov: Yeah, you just know it right from my face, the final exam really sucks my soul. Anyway, why Rin does not back yet this late?
Rin’s mother: She took extra time to get extra paid, so she will be home late, maybe a half-hour again. However, I already prepared the hot tub, you just can use it.
Diatlov: Oh thankyou mother, but I think I’m gonna pick up Rin. See you later.

                  (Diatlov walking out from home, pick his bicycle and goes to minimarket where Rin work)

Rin’s father: Didn’t he said that he is so tired even he lost all his soul?
Rin’s mother: Maybe he already regards Rin as his little sister, it's cute right that a foreign person to take care of a person whose none of his blood-related.
Rin’s father: ah it reminds me of our love story back then.
                 
                  (in the way to minimarket, Diatlov bumps with Rin who backs from work)

Rin: Diatlov!?, where are you going this late!?
Diatlov: Ah, I think I can pick you from your place, but it seems like you already finished with it.
Rin: With a bicycle? You gonna piggybacking me? I thought you are not that good to ride it haha.
Diatlov: Stop it, just let's go home now.
Rin: ah ok ok.

                  (they walk to home, under the light of road lamp and cricket sounds)

Diatlov: By the way, I think it’s 2 weeks again for me to live here, of course after I finished my studies.
Rin: Ah time flies so fast right, I wonder how long you’ve been live with us, you came since I graduated from school…3 months ago?
Diatlov: It’s only 2 months you fool.
Rin: ahaha sorry sorry.
Diatlov: I think you’re just working too much.
Rin: Isn’t that you that study too much? I just can know it by looking to your face.
Diatlov: Ah, I just went home from the campus, but you’re not coming home yet, so I’m going out again to pick you up without taking a bath.
Rin: How cute.
Diatlov: stop teasing me. (silent) anyway, the matsuri, it's this Tuesday fourteenth right? Wanna go there?
Rin: So, 1 half a week more, I don’t think so I can go since I work until night, but let me try to switch my shift with my friend or the manager will reschedule all the worker shifts.
Diatlov: Well, I’m waiting for that

                  (they arrived at home, Diatlov taking bath and Rin drink matcha with her parents)

Rin: mom, dad, did you know that Diatlov will leave 2 weeks again after he finished with his study?
Rin’s mother: we don’t know yet, but we’re happy for him that he finally finished his study, right dad?
Rin’s father: double your word
Rin: yeah...he really did well… (taking a deep breath)
Rin’s mother: you okay? Doesn’t you overworked?
Rin: No no, I’m okay, just stretching my muscle.
Rin’s father: don’t overwork Rin, you can not sick when you are accepted in the university.
Rin: yeah yeah I know.

                  (Tuesday fourteenth come, Diatlov, who gets 2 days off for the Takayama matsuri event, already in front of Hie shrine from 4pm to watch the festival)

Diatlov: (pick his phone from his yukata pocket, calling Rin) hello, you there? Are you coming or not?
Rin: yes yes, I will come, but I’ll be late for 1 hour…maybe, so can you please go first before me? I will join you later with mom and dad.
Diatlov: Well…I already in the back of Hie shrine, guess I will enjoy the show by myself then, take care, I’ll be waiting for you all here. (hang up the call)

                  (almost 2 hours since the call, Rin and her parents go to the festival)

Rin’s mother: I wonder where he is…
Rin: He said that he’s waiting near the shrine…(looking around the shrine) oh, that looks like him, mom dad, enjoy your time, I’m going to meet him there (pointing to a person near the shrine).
Rin’s dad: you sure that was him? My vision is not that good at night…
Rin’s mother: so do I, well let's just enjoy the fest I guess.

                  (Rin meets Diatlov. He showing annoyed face)

Rin: I’m sorry, the road is so crowded (showing apology hand gesture)
Diatlov: As the replacement, you must to…
Rin: I must…do what?
Diatlov: Enjoying the fest with me. (smirking)
Rin: ahh… let's go there. (pointing to loosen place)
Diatlov: So, Rin, I just want to say thank you, for your help and place…of course for your family too who was so kind for me, even though I’m not their kid
Rin: noo it's okay for us, we’re happy to meet a foreign, we also want you to success with your study here…cat’s doctor?
Diatlov: Veterinary…
Rin: Ah yes, veterinary ahahaha
Diatlov: Really? you sure not tired of overworked?
Rin: Ah, did I said some mistake?
Diatlov: Whatever, you need to care for yourself too.
Rin: Ayay cat’s doctor.
Diatlov: For real?

                  (both of them silent, enjoying the shows. Diatlov showing a gesture to talk, but there is something that holds him to keep silent)

Diatlov: So…uhm..about your university? Any update?
Rin: It seems like they will announce at the end of this month, damn I really excited to hear the news whether I’m accepted or not.
Diatlov: You need to study a lot if you accepted there, it’s not as easy as high school you know.
Rin: yes yes, my parents often said that to me.
Diatlov: that’s good then, show that they really care…and…love you.
Rin: Is it? How lucky I am to have them hahaha (giggling)
Diatlov: Yes, you are. By the way…(stop talking)
Rin: By the way..? what?
Diatlov: Suki (looked up to the bright and clear sky)
Rin: Tsuki? Oh wow, the sky so clear that the moon shining so bright.
Diatlov: Ah yes..the moon, beautiful isn’t it..(looks to Rin face)
Rin: Ahah. (look to her vibrating phone) ah, there is my friend messaging me, this lateee!!! It’s 11pm already.
Diatlov: Guess it’s time to go home.

                  (they both go home, as the festival sequentially begin to end)

It’s Diatlov's last day in Japan. He finished with his magister study as veterinary and ready to go to the airport to go home to his hometown in Russia.

Diatlov: Father, mother, a big thanks to you for all your care for me these 2 half months, I will never forget all your kindness. I will call you if I’ve arrived at my home.
Rin’s mother: We will miss you son, we already think of you as our own kid, don’t forget us, give us a call at least once per week.
Diatlov: yes I will!. And Rin…good luck with your university, don’t forget to study hard if you accepted, but I believe that you will be accepted.
Rin: Yes, onii-san.
Diatlov: Ah, you finally call me with that. I hope that I can visit you all later. I will… I will miss the time when I pick you from work.
Rin: Even though you never reach the market? Hahaha. Yeah, I will miss that moment too, I hope can meet you again later, don’t forget to keep chatting with me through message yes.
Diatlov: Of course I will, guess I need to go now. (hugging Rin’s mother and father, enters the cab)
Rin’s mother: save trip son! ( the three waving goodbye to Diatlov)
Rin: hmfphh (taking a deep breath)
Rin’s mother: what’s wrong Rin?
Rin: (smiling) no, I hope that he will visit this house, again.
Rin’s father: ahh, you already missed your big brother? That’s cute
Rin: stop teasing me dad!.



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